CARR MAKES HIS POINT

 

The article, “Is Google Making Us Stupid”, is by Nicolas Carr. According to his website, Carr writes about technology and culture (“Home”). Carr not only writes articles for The Atlantic, but according to his website, “…for the Wall Street Journal, the New York Times, Wired, Nature, MIT Technology Review, and many other periodicals” (“Home”). Carr holds a college degree and is a “…former member of the Encyclopedia Britannica’s editorial board of advisors” (“Home”). Based off of the information from his website, Carr is a trustworthy author because of his expertise on multiple topics, his education level, and his effectiveness throughout all his articles. This particular author addresses his audience in these ways.

 

In the article, “Is Google Making Us Stupid?”, Carr argues that the internet is causing humans to face troubles when reading from a book. The primary audience of this article is students, parents, teachers, or doctors. The secondary audience is anyone interested in learning how the brain works, or anyone who uses the internet, in general. The age group for this article could range from 16-65. The ads displayed on the web, suggest that the audience must be in high school or been through it and have some knowledge relating to them. In addition to the ads, Carr uses sophisticated word choice, only a person with reading experience

can read. Based off his word choice here,  “…still await the long-term neurological and psychological experiments that will provide a definitive picture of how Internet use affects cognition…” (Carr, “Is Google Making Us Stupid?”), it’s clear to say that’s true. However, it’s important to know why he wrote this article.

  Image of higher level word choice.

The purpose of this article is to inform the world that the internet is causing troubles when reading into a book, known as the “traditional sense”. However, Carr is promoting a message that the internet is forcing problems onto to humans we may or may not notice, but also mention the advantages of using the web. He says, “Our ability to interpret text… remains largely disengaged” (Carr, “Is Google Making Us Stupid?”). The internet is triggering unknown habits. Carr’s primary intentions is to inform the reader of the advantages and disadvantages of reading online. His secondary intention is to persuade the readers to read online, but also to continue reading on paper. He’s suggesting that you should read specific texts on paper and others online. Nonetheless, whether you read more online or not, it’s essential to know why Carr says what he says.

The article, “Is Google Making Us Stupid” was written in July/August of 2008. Typically, this article would be read in a classroom, on a computer, and/or a tablet or phone. This article would most likely be published in a magazine or at a school, or doctor’s office. This article may also be a link on social media. Carr formats his article in a way that keeps the reader’s attention. He uses images, such as interesting colorful ads after each couple paragraphs. Also, he utilizes highlighted words, names, phrases, and/or titles of texts.

Like other internet articles, this article contains, ads, pictures relating to the topic of the article, and highlighted words. The Atlantic magazine “…publish factual information that utilizes loaded words (wording that attempts to influence an audience by using appeal to emotion…” (“Left-Centered Bias”). Unlike other sources, this article really doesn’t display any bright colors, besides the pictures under the paragraphs. However, the picture where you first start reading the article is brightly colored and looks like it could be hand drawn or painted. The image displays a man, “internet patrol” giving another man a ticket. This picture gives an comical aspect to Carr’s article because it shows us how the internet controls our life.

The font of the title, subtitles, and captions, all use different fonts. In the opening page of the article, there is a big heading in bold text that captures the reader’s attention. The entire article is written in Times New Roman font, besides the subtitle, the author’s name, and the issue date. Although, the article was straightforward and easy to navigate, I wish the article wasn’t as long as it is because it did become difficult to keep my attention. In spite of that, Carr’s article did supply its readers with sufficient evidence.

To sum up, the article, “Is Google Making Us Stupid” was very convincing. I was convinced because Carr’s use of numerous sources to defend his claims, his expertise of this topic, and his effectiveness with making his claims. Carr’s article persuaded me because he was able to convince me to continue reading online, but also to keep reading on paper too.

 

 

 

Rhetorical Analysis assignment

In the article, Is Google Making Us Stupid, Nicholas Carr explores the underlying truth of what the Web is doing to us. It is controlling our every move. We depend more on the internet for so much. This machine that man created is destroying our thoughts and our attention so much that we are ignoring the beauty of information that is physically around us. We are now reading academic journals, solving math equations, and googling answers to our own questions online. Communication is long gone for all we know.

On his personal website, being a freelance writer since 2003 as well as formerly working as an executive editor for the Harvard Business Review (“About”), Nicholas Carr spends his time writing about technology and culture, which his thoughts and writings have been featured in The Atlantic, The Wall Street Journal, The New York Times, and many more (“Home”). Not only has Carr been featured in articles, but he also has many books. From a collection of the best essays, blog posts, and other writing from the past years transforms into one of his new books, Utopia Is Creepy. The book can easily be described as “an uncompromising portrait of the internet.” (New Scientist). Here in the article, “Is Google Making Us Stupid?” Carr explores the truth of our minds and how we read on the internet. With Carr’s history in writing and where it has been published I highly trust Carr’s information as he’s been featured in several other websites, which he has received positive feedback from the audience.

The audience is most likely young adults as well as older men and women around 18-30 years old who highly depend on the internet for everything as well as having interest in technology, society, and the news in the world around us. The author goes in description on how the internet is taking over our thoughts as we struggle with reading online rather than what we should interpret from the world around us. The author used key people like bloggers, humanist, and philosopher to explain the phenomena of what the internet is doing to our thought process and how it is destroying our capacity to devote our attention to numerous page articles online.

The purpose of this article is to inform the audience of why so many of us depend on the internet for answers as well as how our minds wander off as we read on the internet. Carr states, “Research that once required days in the stacks or periodical rooms of libraries can now be done in minutes” (“Is Google Making Us Stupid?”). He explains how easy it is to find the answers or other important information online. In the click of an enter key our answers or even vital information is found just like that.  But what happens when we depend all our thinking on the internet? Carr claims from other colleagues, “The more they use the Web, the more they have to fight to stay focused on long pieces of writing” (“Is Google Making Us Stupid?”). He describes how hard it is to focus reading writings every time they use the Web. Truth be told, the ads on this article may have made readers have a hard time focusing on Carr’s article as well. Our attention span is unfortunately not as strong as it used to be when we were younger with all the distractions that are dancing around on the screen as we read articles after articles that about 4 pages long.

The context of the article is on the web, under The Atlantic mainly targeting an audience of technology and culture interest as well as news and opinions, which Carr has a strong opinion of how reading on the internet affects how we read and comprehend the text given. The author most likely chose the website, The Atlantic to publish this article because in our day and age people are constantly doing all their reading at a desk on a computer or on the go in their hands as it could be a smart phone. Easily The Atlantic’s articles can be viewed across Facebook and Twitter as people are constantly on social media. As well as The Atlantic being a cultural society based website. The text gives additional information regarding what the internet is doing to us as we read on the internet. How we read on the internet may not be different it’s just our minds are thinking differently and not as focused.

The genre of this article is very simple. The font appears to be Times New Roman, not trying to make the article appear fancy, but mainly focusing on the information in the text rather than its appearance. As for the colors in this article it’s pretty straight forward black text and white background. Not much color except an illustration, adding a little bit of comic relief as there is a police car and on it reads “internet patrol” as he has pulled someone over. This illustrates how strong and controlling the internet is upon users, which we don’t have control when using the internet sometimes. Several tabs are available up at the top for additional articles and other reads. Generally, the genre of this text is very modern based on society as it has the latest and most popular news and information from culture, business, technology, and many more.

Illustration by Guy Billout

Throughout reading this article I would say I agree with Carr’s claims. As we can no longer focus reading online because our minds just can’t stay focused anymore as we start to drift away from everything. The internet has so much more control over us than we think. But in other ways reading online can be very convenient to where with a simple click of a hyperlink we are automatically taken to more information we need. Due to Carr’s response he has been featured in several pieces of writing, so his opinion has affected the way people view reading online. I would use this article for an academic paper because Carr referred to many humanist and philosophers from outside research.